Just addressing some comments I’m getting for the Nualia short

Why didn’t he just wish to fuck her and not die or etc etc?

I put in specific lines to explain that he isn’t thinking straight anymore after that. Remember he was ready to die then started experiencing the best sex in his life and then it suddenly stops. That should be enough to make anyone not think straight for awhile.

I could also just say Nualia is doing some sort of mind trick on him but I like the above explanation better.

Who is Nualia?

LordAardvark’s OC but I ignored that and made my own character out of her.

Why no sound?

I previously hired someone to do it for me but he suddenly wasn’t available when I finished animating. Went to a second guy and same story. I just gave up. I’m thinking of just learning how to sound design myself to avoid incidents like this.

Will there be more?

No plans right now but I had fun making it and so far you guys enjoyed it so maybe.

I do appreciate the comments on my writing though, positive or negative so if you have any let me know. It’s the only way I can improve.