Q:Went through the VN: pretty solid for a first attempt. The writing on the POV character's side was a little stiff, but other than that it was quite enjoyable. If you decided this was something you wanted to do more of, I think you should consider making them Patreon exclusive.

gezthespy

Thanks for the input. When I was making the POV dialogue I was aiming for it to be as neutral as possible. I don’t know if that helps me or not but that’s my excuse. 

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